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Will she want to see me?
When all is said and done
When she is raised accordingly
Until the setting sun?

Will she want to see me?
With tears that kiss her eyes
Will she even hear of me?
Please lord, don't let me cry

Will she want to see me?
As she begins to age
Will he even speak of me,
or leave me at the gate?

Will he tell his new angel,
about the one he lost?
Will he tell her happily
That the path I chose was Wrong?

Will she still want to see me?
If he fills her head with lies
Will she ever hear of me?
Will the hero in him die?

Will I ever get to see her?
This little girl I don't know
Will I ever get to comfort her,
from the monsters and the cold?

For now it stays a mystery,
if I'll ever see her face
If that little girl I long to know,
will ever call my name.
i wrote this in honer of my little sister i last saw her when she was barly 1 shes about 4 this past may, i wasthinking of my past and then of my father and then of her i was asking myself if ide ever c her again ide like 2 but i dont no where she is as it is but thats y i wrote this. kiera if u ever read this, i love you
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TwinAgateDragons Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Deep, riveting and inspirational. Well done.
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
aha thank u :tighthug:
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lonelynightrain Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

Wow, this is a really well written poem and is incredibly deep.

 

I hope that you do get to see your little sister again, Candygirl.

 

I'll keep you and your family in my prayers.  I hope that you have a great and blessed day and may the Lord keep you and your family safe.

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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you that is so kind of you im hopeing 2 c her again 2 and ile prey 4 u 2
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lonelynightrain Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome.
And thank you.
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